Monday, March 10, 2025

The Curse of the - Dramatic - Dash: poem

 

Lawrence Hall

Mhall46184@aol.com

Dispatches for the Colonial Office

 

The Curse of the – Dramatic - Dash

 

The dash for – dramatic pause – infests

Almost every – essay – these days

Such errant usages - have become pests

And thoughtful writers - might want to mend - their ways

 

A clear English sentence  - is tight - and terse

A model of - artistic - clarity

But all those pointless - dashes - just make it worse

Compromising its - structural - harmony

 

If in re-writing you find – you’ve placed a dash

Just rip that sucker - out – and toss it in –

                                                          the trash!

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