Friday, September 13, 2024

I Had a Flat Tire Along the Silk Road - not a Tang quatrain

 


Lawrence Hall, HSG

Mhall46184@aol.com

 

I Had a Flat Tire Along the Silk Road

 

A bandit-princess stole my trail-lost heart

To play with carelessly one idle day

She teased me a road sketched on her magic chart

But I had a flat tire along the way




In reading Li Po (variant pronunciations and spellings in English) and others, and trying to understand Tang quatrains, well, I don’t understand much. The forms and content are so varied as to make the term almost undefinable to my simple English soul. But nature, irony, loss, and separation are apparently common, as well as rhyme, so I took them and iambic pentameter for this not-really-a-Tang-quatrain.

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